This afternoon, HIGH MOON hit 40,000 views ...
Not a bad way to end 2007!
Alas, my scanner is still not working quite right, so instead, I thought I'd post the first draft of the first page of script from HIGH MOON. The hyperlinks are reference points I included for Steve, who added his own unique twist. This is not the final script, but should shed some light on how Steve and I put the scene together.
Enjoy!
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PAGE ONE
Panel One:
ESTABLISHING SHOT / MEDIUM SHOT / NIGHT TIME – The full moon’s light is fully visible in the night sky. It is as bright as the sun, with a bluish tinge. There are a few wispy clouds, but not many stars. It is here that we get a small glimpse of Blest, Texas and the house of the Hunter family, theirs is the nicest house in the town.
Margaret 1 [off screen]: Dear Lord …
Panel Two:
Transition shot as we see that same light reflecting in the window of MARGARET HUNTER’S bedroom. Margaret, age six, has blond hair and blue eyes, and is the daughter of the town’s founder, GABRIEL HUNTER. (Think Dakota Fanning meets a Campbell’s Soup Kid) She is at the foot of her bed, in a full-length nightgown praying quietly to herself. Her bedroom door is slightly ajar letting some light pass through. That and the moonlight are light sources in an otherwise dimly lit room. On her bed, we see a little doll. (circa 1890s)
Margaret 1: Please protect Mommy.
Mommy 1 [off screen]: I don’t care about your damn town …
Mommy 2: [off screen]: Or the damn silver mine!
Panel Three:
Focus on the shouting that’s coming from the door, as Margaret continues to pray … the door moves slightly …
Margaret 1: Please save Daddy
Daddy 1 [off screen]: I built THIS town! I can HANDLE The Sullivan Gang!
Panel Four:
Margaret continues to pray …the door moves slightly …
Margaret 1: And … please …
Margaret 2: God Bless Texas?
Panel Five:
The door closes. We see a shadowy form, a human-like silhouette, cast against the door.
Margaret 1: Amen.
Panel Six:
This panel is completely black. The white, lowercase text will fill up the page. The text will be strung together to indicate something wicked.
Hey guys,
You may have noticed that we put the Rankings live last night. Again, this show the Current Rank. You can continue to vote (or change your vote) right on up until the end of the Competition - November 30th.
Looks like High Moon is in the lead right now, so congratulations to Dave, Steve and Scott - but remember, it's not over yet! We're still about two weeks away from closing the polls and so far only 50% of the users have cast their ballot! That means half of you guys have yet to make up your mind. If you haven't voted (or if you know of someone who hasn't voted) then nows the time!
From The High Moon Team:Okay guys, you've seen the ten competitors and you've read their comics. The competition is officially on! I'd like to point out some of the finer points of how we're collectively evaluating these comics.It's On! | Zuda Comics
First off, there is the vote. You'll see the big VOTE button right on the Competition Page and on the Comic Information drop-down on the Comic Page itself. This is your number one decision making tool. Vote for the comic you want to see become an ongoing series.
Next up is the RATING. You'll find this just below the vote, in the Comic Information section of the Comic Page. This is a more subtle tool that lets you rate each comic on a scale from one through five stars. While you can only Vote for one comic at a time, you can Rate them all. This will be a crucial tool in close races where more nuance is needed in order to accurately express your opinions. Incidentally, the Rating tool will also come in handy for letting us know how you feel the ongoing series (like BAYOU) are going.
We've also got FAVORITES. It's in the same Comic Information panel, near the bottom. Some people have confused this with voting so let me clarify. You can Favorite any comic you want, any time. It will then show up on your Profile Page. It's a simple way for you to navigate to the comics you like (yeah...I mean, once we have more than 12 on site) and for letting other people know you're tastes. Especially if you're active in COMMENTING.
COMMENTS, of course, can be found directly beneath the comics themselves. A quick sidebar about Comments: the newest is at the top, closest to the comic. I know this is a bit backwards but we're trying something out here - bear with us. The thinking is that we want the most recent comments up top, near the comic itself. That way the comic and the comments are updated near each other so that users need to do as little scrolling up and down the page as possible. Let's see how that works and feel free to give us FEEDBACK on it.
Jumping around that Comic Information section you'll see that we're tracking the VIEWS as well. We figure some people just like to read without any greater level of participation. That's ok by us and as far as the competition goes, having a widely read comic is a great indicator of success. It's worth noting that this is one of the criteria that does not require registration. This is an indicator of how many times the comic was read by anyone, registered or not.
Finally, in that same Comic Information section you'll see the SEND TO A FRIEND link. Comics have a long history of being passed on from friend to friend, grass roots style. There was no way to know how many issues actually we're passed from friend to friend, other than to know that it happened. Here we're hoping to be able to give the comics credit for inspiring that kind of interest.
So, what I'm saying here is that everything counts. The Vote is obviously the main indicator, but we're looking at the rest of this information as well.
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